Well, you asked for a critique so here we go with my best. Overall, the picture is not bad but not that great as a picture. The colors are great and smooth, it's one of the best on this deviation. The position looks good, easy to do for you I could say though. Now, the legs does not seem to look okay at all, and we can start with the fingers since there are four! Four fingers at the foots but there are five fingers at the hands, quite weird. Those fingers looks also too big, those seem to be inflated actually. There's not much I can say about this drawing, the background could be better, the choose of colors doesn't seem to fit this time. Best from this picture were the colors in general, the face details are good too and I liked some extra line effects at the dress. Shinkoto, going good anyway, we know your potential is animation.